Athena Pierce
Athena Pierce
"Why don’t we end this feud/ Muzzle this vendetta/ (or) We both lose/ Although I am right/ Subterfuge/ Is never gonna win the fight/ Even If I never change your mind (BNC)"
ImpossibleKings commented on athenawp's lyric:
"Like this a lot Athena - might be a tad short rhythmically. Read the 1st pre-chorus to see what I mean.👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"
(more)"We’re building bridges, we’re answering the call"
ImpossibleKings commented on athenawp's lyric:
"Athena! Sweet lines and welcome to our collaboration!"
(more)"Breathe it in, and let’s begin To take care of each other Ask someone where they come from There’s so much to discover"
"Why don’t we end this feud/ Muzzle this vendetta/ (or) We both lose/ Although I am right/ Subterfuge/ Is never gonna win the fight/ Even If I never change your mind (BNC)"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on athenawp's lyric:
"ooohhh..."impart"....what a fresh rhyme!"
(more)"Maybe there’s a spark/ Just a little light/ Trying to impart"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on athenawp's lyric:
"I love rhyming blind with inclined...good one!"
(more)"(Edit after BNC's input): We're living in a world so blind (BNC)/ Even I don't understand the things we see/ But maybe if your heart's inclined/ We could just agree (decide) to disagree"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on athenawp's lyric:
"close!
playing off what you wrote:
We're living in a world so blind
And it's crazy just how
differently we see
pretending that we'll be just fine
whenever we agree to disagree
"
"The world's becoming not so kind/ It's a sad position we both see/ But I think we're gonna be just fine/ As long as we agree to disagree"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on athenawp's lyric:
"LOVE how that second line fits!
how can you keep it more specific?
You say people grow apart sometimes
I don't necessarily agree
Even though we have our fights
We go back to being you and me
"
"Friends say people fall apart sometimes/ I don't necessarily agree/ You and I just have our fights/ Then go back to being you and me"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on athenawp's lyric:
"close in so many ways! but we've already used "middle" in a big way ...we need fresh words for this section! I love "stand my ground"!!"
(more)"I could stand my ground or meet you in the middle / You won’t back down/ I’m wasting my time / Life’s too short not to love a little/ Fine/ I’m never gonna change your mind"
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ImpossibleKings commented on athenawp's lyric:
"Like this a lot Athena - might be a tad short rhythmically. Read the 1st pre-chorus to see what I mean.👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"
(more)"We’re building bridges, we’re answering the call"