Marty Dodson commented on billysweens' lyric:
"These lines fit the melody really well. I like where you are going with it, but it feels a little less complementary to the woman we are singing to. I wonder if you could use a different angle on the word "fall"?"
(more)"Tongue-tied and crazy, got me climbin' the wall / I don't wanna come down, I'm so afraid I might fall"
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Marty Dodson commented on billysweens' lyric:
"These lines fit the melody really well. I like where you are going with it, but it feels a little less complementary to the woman we are singing to. I wonder if you could use a different angle on the word "fall"?"
(more)"Tongue-tied and crazy, got me climbin' the wall / I don't wanna come down, I'm so afraid I might fall"