Clay Mills commented on candicebetz79@gmail.com's lyric:
"I like the first half of the line..."Ya’ said I’d never find anyone better than you"... but a good opening line never tells the whole story. The second half of the line... "Now that I’ve left I know it’s not true" tells the whole story, so there"s nowhere left to go or write in the rest of the song.. :)"
(more)"Ya’ said I’d never find anyone better than you Now that I’ve left I know it’s not true"
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Clay Mills commented on candicebetz79@gmail.com's lyric:
"I like the first half of the line..."Ya’ said I’d never find anyone better than you"... but a good opening line never tells the whole story. The second half of the line... "Now that I’ve left I know it’s not true" tells the whole story, so there"s nowhere left to go or write in the rest of the song.. :)"
(more)"Ya’ said I’d never find anyone better than you Now that I’ve left I know it’s not true"