"I look for a rainbow in your eyes/and for the blinding light of Truth"
"But you can't say the words that she's longing to hear/you're remembering lost loves and living in fear"
"I look for a rainbow in your eyes/and for the blinding light of Truth"
"But you and I, we can try/to strive and reach infinity."
"are ripples in the sky/and we're just passersby."
"Old bones on a new adventure/open the cellar door to reach your newborn nature."
Chris Barron commented on dangerman1's lyric:
"*can't help knocking on my own backdoor* good stuff"
(more)"Can't help thinking there must be something more/can't help knocking on my own backdoor."
"No sin to wanna win when you walk out the door/what for? you gotta score before you ever begin"
Chris Barron commented on dangerman1's lyric:
"omit words like "even", "just" and "that". usually the line gets better. (that's a john lennon trick that jeff cohen taught me)"
(more)"Sometimes I change my mind before I even finish a thought/I blink and then I think maybe I'm just livin' for naught."
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Jack Tempchin commented on dangerman1's lyric:
"good line"
(more)"But you can't say the words that she's longing to hear/you're remembering lost loves and living in fear"