Clay Mills commented on daviddelgado's lyric:
"I like this thought for the song. Not intriguing enough for the first line, but is on point. Maybe a potential chorus line later. 👆"
(more)"You were the first one To see right through me And to know ever single thing About me That could be better"
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Clay Mills commented on daviddelgado's lyric:
"I like this thought for the song. Not intriguing enough for the first line, but is on point. Maybe a potential chorus line later. 👆"
(more)"You were the first one To see right through me And to know ever single thing About me That could be better"