"This world is meant for sharin'"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Donna O's lyric:
"like a lot of this...but try to get it ABAB:
well you're never gonna change my mind
there's nothing you can do or say
sure as the sun's gonna shine
----any other way
this is not yet quite right but that's the way the rhyme needs to go now that I've been diving into these fabulous lyric options!
"
"Well you're never gonna change my mind/Sure as the sun in gonna shine There's nothin' you can do or say/that could make me feel any other way (this is intended to take a positive spin - meaning I will always love you no matter what)"
ImpossibleKings commented on Donna O's lyric:
"This is really good Donna! def the right direction!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"
(more)"Breathe in and feel the power, our words can be the spark"
"Let’s dig a little deeper and find that common ground"
"This world is meant for sharin'"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Donna O's lyric:
"like a lot of this...but try to get it ABAB:
well you're never gonna change my mind
there's nothing you can do or say
sure as the sun's gonna shine
----any other way
this is not yet quite right but that's the way the rhyme needs to go now that I've been diving into these fabulous lyric options!
"
"Well you're never gonna change my mind/Sure as the sun in gonna shine There's nothin' you can do or say/that could make me feel any other way (this is intended to take a positive spin - meaning I will always love you no matter what)"
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ImpossibleKings commented on Donna O's lyric:
"This is really good Donna! def the right direction!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"
(more)"Breathe in and feel the power, our words can be the spark"