Francine Honey
Francine Honey
Francine Honey
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Francine_Honey's lyric:
"That's absolutely alright! The whole song is still in gel form and can be moved all around! Very interesting idea! I'm not super in love with starting the bridge with "it's" though...and I don't like telling the other person how they feel. Never goes over to me. But like the idea of letting down one's guard..."
(more)"It’s tearing you apart, giving up the fight But In the middle of your heart, hidden out of sight Your letting down your guard to the notion that I might be right NOTE: I suggested a change in the order of the lines...hope that is allowed!??? Beth: I think the first 2 lines are a pretty good lead into the last line. Something to consider? I am new here so I don't know if this should go in the comments section?"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Francine_Honey's lyric:
"closer is not the rhyme there...it should be:
I could state my case/over and over/Hoping someday, we will BE FINE
"
" I could state my case/over and over/Hoping someday, we will get back closer/to the way we were/when we on the same side, but I'm never gonna change your mind"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Francine_Honey's lyric:
"LOVELY first line
"there's a wall of words
standing in between us
then...syllables gone wild....stick to the melody!!
Makes me also think what if it was:
We got a war of words
Spoken in between us
then write 10 more of just this to get the absolute best one!
We got a _ _ _
_ _ in between us
We got a _ _ _
_ _ all around us
"
"There's a wall of (&) words/standing in between us/My wishes have wings/they're not flying high enough/To reach that place, on the other side/I'm never change your mind"
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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Francine_Honey's lyric:
"That's absolutely alright! The whole song is still in gel form and can be moved all around! Very interesting idea! I'm not super in love with starting the bridge with "it's" though...and I don't like telling the other person how they feel. Never goes over to me. But like the idea of letting down one's guard..."
(more)"It’s tearing you apart, giving up the fight But In the middle of your heart, hidden out of sight Your letting down your guard to the notion that I might be right NOTE: I suggested a change in the order of the lines...hope that is allowed!??? Beth: I think the first 2 lines are a pretty good lead into the last line. Something to consider? I am new here so I don't know if this should go in the comments section?"