Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Glenna's lyric:
"like this direction...seems to lead nicely from where we left off at the bridge!"
(more)"Lose or win / really doesn’t matter / yang and yin / works every time / let’s give in / everything will be just fine / but I’m never gonna change your mind"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Glenna's lyric:
"Good lines...but it's always more powerful to talk about you and not preach to someone else...here's another way to present these lines that I think go down much easier with most listeners:
My spirit's voice
Always there to guide me
It's my choice
Hate or be kind
With 2 viewpoints
Love will win out everytime
Though I'm never gonna change your mind
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"(Your) spirit’s voice / Listen, it’ll guide you / It’s a choice / Hate or be kind / Two viewpoints / I know love wins ev’ry time / But I’m never gonna change your mind"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Glenna's lyric:
"hi Kenny...in response to your comments...I do think minds do change...but only the holder of the mind has the ability to actually change it. Though others can influence...they hold the controls! that's just my belief!
Glenna...I LOVE "speak to your emotions" great line!"
"Well I could switch my game / speak to your emotions / make you feel / compassion inside / I could touch your soul / try to change your heart this time (still prefer ‘in time’)/ cause I’m never gonna change your mind"
"Well I could switch my game / speak to your emotions / make you feel / compassion inside / I could touch your soul / try to change your heart this time (still prefer ‘in time’)/ cause I’m never gonna change your mind"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Glenna's lyric:
"really like "gotta get our hearts in line"
Since we used "heart" in the first section what other things could we get in line? Leads in really nice to the last line...."
"Well I won’t give up / I’ll try to win you over / (I) can’t back down / Cause we’re two of a kind / Please come ’round / Gotta get our hearts in line / Am I ever gonna change your mind"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Glenna's lyric:
"good stuff here! "speak to your emotions" lays in there super easy....
"bring you to cry" is straining on the melody...what's a more singable way to say that?
I like "try to change your heart in time" but you MUST have in the same section some indication of "in time for what"??"
"Well I could make you feel /Speak to your emotions / Show you things / That bring you to cry / I could reach your soul / Try to change your heart in time / But I'm never gonna change your mind"
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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Glenna's lyric:
"like this direction...seems to lead nicely from where we left off at the bridge!"
(more)"Lose or win / really doesn’t matter / yang and yin / works every time / let’s give in / everything will be just fine / but I’m never gonna change your mind"