Marty Dodson commented on gpstaton's lyric:
"A little poetic, but nice line. I"ve never said "heart"s desire" to anyone in real life. Maybe there"s a way to make this more conversational."
(more)"With soft warm kisses no words required / Your every touch knows my hearts desire"
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Marty Dodson commented on gpstaton's lyric:
"A little poetic, but nice line. I"ve never said "heart"s desire" to anyone in real life. Maybe there"s a way to make this more conversational."
(more)"With soft warm kisses no words required / Your every touch knows my hearts desire"