Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on hookman's lyric:
"VERY hooky!! try try try!!
"cause I ain't no" is hard to sing easily with the melody...why not:
"I’m gonna try, try, try
I am not not a quitter
why why why_____"
keep going!!!"
"Still I try, try, try"
"I want to share every sunrise.."
"I finally I had a clear view..had to walk a mile in your shoes..."
"We have all the ingredients for happily ever after..perfect recipe for the next chapter..."
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on hookman's lyric:
"VERY hooky!! try try try!!
"cause I ain't no" is hard to sing easily with the melody...why not:
"I’m gonna try, try, try
I am not not a quitter
why why why_____"
keep going!!!"
"Still I try, try, try"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on hookman's lyric:
"Ha! very imaginative! But you've lost the rhyme plot! Great rhymes though...but you gotta follow the melody and rhyme scheme laid out!
First 2 lines are great! "
"Well..I'm gonna try,try,try I'm not not a guitter. Why, why, why, won't you reconsider..gonna work, work, work till I get a blister..cause being stubborn ain't a crime.."
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The Springs Band commented on hookman's lyric:
"Ah thats cool!"
(more)"I want to share every sunrise.."