Brad Roberts commented on Michael's lyric:
"how can facts be both simple - which suggests economy of thinking - and clumsy - which suggests the opposite of clarity. good job. thanks for your submission."
(more)"With simple clumsy facts floating through our open heads, the stars may be our future but we stay below instead."
"The ground is where you reach up to a sky thats falling down, to a place that we might arrive and ghosts are all but found"
Brad Roberts commented on Michael's lyric:
"nice first try! i think this is your first? thanks for writing. try to rhyme that couplet, friend!"
(more)"If I stare up at the stars for long enough I'll get to sleep. But the stars remind me of things that keep me awake at night "
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Brad Roberts commented on Michael's lyric:
"how can facts be both simple - which suggests economy of thinking - and clumsy - which suggests the opposite of clarity. good job. thanks for your submission."
(more)"With simple clumsy facts floating through our open heads, the stars may be our future but we stay below instead."