"I think we should go / Find a big container / Take our woes / Place them inside / Top it with a bow / Put it where the sun don’t shine / ‘Cause I’m never gonna change your mind"
Marty Dodson commented on NeilOS's lyric:
"Really like the simplicty and realness here, Neil! Great work!"
(more)"Lord knows you're pretty, but you're so much more/'Cause no one's made me feel this way before"
Marti Dodson commented on NeilOS's lyric:
"I like this Neil! I'm feeling a bit more family sentimental so I'm not sure it has a home in this song, but it's a cool thought!
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"All my 80's heroes are gone / Now and then I still play their songs"
"I think we should go / Find a big container / Take our woes / Place them inside / Top it with a bow / Put it where the sun don’t shine / ‘Cause I’m never gonna change your mind"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on NeilOS's lyric:
"really close! Again...NOT the same amount of syllables as the melody...
here's a version that fixes that:
Well we can talk all night
Doesn't really matter
Wrong or right
This mountain we climb
Let's not fight
I don't want to ___ if I'm....
Never gonna change your mind
Keep trying diffent senarios! But follow the guide above as far as the short phrases and where the rhymes fall!
oh...another possible last line:
I'm gonna to have to ____ if I'm....
Never gonna change your mind
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"Well, we could talk all night / It's not going to matter / 'Cause proving who's right / Is a mountain we climb / Been through this / Too many times just to find / I'm never going to change your mind"
Marty Dodson commented on NeilOS's lyric:
"Really like the simplicty and realness here, Neil! Great work!"
(more)"Lord knows you're pretty, but you're so much more/'Cause no one's made me feel this way before"
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Marti Dodson commented on NeilOS's lyric:
"I like this Neil! I'm feeling a bit more family sentimental so I'm not sure it has a home in this song, but it's a cool thought!
(more)"
"All my 80's heroes are gone / Now and then I still play their songs"