Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on NewtonN's lyric:
"creative examples but how do they serve the idea of changing someone's mind? Also...when you read this out it's not how you would talk. The best lyrics are always conversational... keep going though! Good imagination!"
(more)"I could dye my hair /Take a long vacation / Tell my friends / I had enough of it all / But no lost cause / Gonna be the one that I can’t find / Never gonna change your mind"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on NewtonN's lyric:
"like the idea of not being able to turn the tide...fits with this overall idea for the song...but we are going for ABAB so there's no AA scheme planned at this point!
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"I’m never going change your mind/ It’s like waiting on the tide to turn"
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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on NewtonN's lyric:
"creative examples but how do they serve the idea of changing someone's mind? Also...when you read this out it's not how you would talk. The best lyrics are always conversational... keep going though! Good imagination!"
(more)"I could dye my hair /Take a long vacation / Tell my friends / I had enough of it all / But no lost cause / Gonna be the one that I can’t find / Never gonna change your mind"