Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Tasia's lyric:
"if we were going with AA this would be near perfecto.
"will never" is a bit cumbersome. I'd say
"and you'll never ever ever change mine"
which might make a great last line of the chorus! so we'll earmark that!"
"Well, I'm never gonna change your mind/you sure as hell will never change mine"
"Every stolen moment through the madness of this life/ Every stolen moment shows it's gonna be alright/only darkness brings the blind man back into the light/every moment stolen steals the silence of the night"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Tasia's lyric:
"if we were going with AA this would be near perfecto.
"will never" is a bit cumbersome. I'd say
"and you'll never ever ever change mine"
which might make a great last line of the chorus! so we'll earmark that!"
"Well, I'm never gonna change your mind/you sure as hell will never change mine"
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Gary Lucas commented on Tasia's lyric:
"Nice"
(more)"Every stolen moment through the madness of this life/ Every stolen moment shows it's gonna be alright/only darkness brings the blind man back into the light/every moment stolen steals the silence of the night"