Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on someguy's lyric:
"I have to say I lean away from telling the other person how they feel or what's happening for them. What happens if you just tell me about you? how much better this would come across:
I try to set my thoughts aside
There's nothing else that I can really do
But still I might just lose my mind
If I can't let it go I'll have to stew
This is much more engaging to the listener in my opinion! :)"
"We can try to set our thoughts aside/Because there's not much else to do/But still we both lose our minds/ When we let each other go and stew"
"The clouds comfort me but I struggle to sleep/ The empty ocean of my mind keeps me in too deep"
"Connection is the gentle reminder of a long awaited kiss"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on someguy's lyric:
"I have to say I lean away from telling the other person how they feel or what's happening for them. What happens if you just tell me about you? how much better this would come across:
I try to set my thoughts aside
There's nothing else that I can really do
But still I might just lose my mind
If I can't let it go I'll have to stew
This is much more engaging to the listener in my opinion! :)"
"We can try to set our thoughts aside/Because there's not much else to do/But still we both lose our minds/ When we let each other go and stew"
"The clouds comfort me but I struggle to sleep/ The empty ocean of my mind keeps me in too deep"
Chris Barron commented on someguy's lyric:
"currency and time are a nice play on words. it'd be nice to follow that further..."
(more)"Currency of time"
"My subconscious is all I have now/ No money, no work, no life, no wow"
Chris Barron commented on someguy's lyric:
"what can you use for *subconcious* that's more specific? a hole in the wall? the underside of a rock? a cave? an empty sheet of paper? a pillow? a forgotten bird?"
(more)"My subconscious is all I have now/ No money, no work, no life, no wow"
"All I have is my next meal no reason to be nervous/ But now I wonder is God is real and if ypu think He heard us"
"My life is a series of not ups just downs / Life is full of color but mine is full of browns"
"My life is a series of not ups just downs / Life is full of color but mine is full of browns"
"There is no book from which I'm speaking/ The story of my soul is my only beacon"
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ImpossibleKings commented on someguy's lyric:
"Really good Tad!!!!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"
(more)"Connection is the gentle reminder of a long awaited kiss"