Marty Dodson commented on Ted Morse's lyric:
"News flash. Man killed by woman after singing her a love song with a mistake in the last line of the bridge! At least he asked, I suppose"
(more)"so please, go make some breakfast baby"
Marti Dodson commented on Ted Morse's lyric:
"love the first half of this! it's a big thought though..maybe more chorusy
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"I wouldn't be me if it wasn't for you, like this snapshot in time crazy things we would do"
Marty Dodson commented on Ted Morse's lyric:
"News flash. Man killed by woman after singing her a love song with a mistake in the last line of the bridge! At least he asked, I suppose"
(more)"so please, go make some breakfast baby"
"girl/i hope that everyday/starts/and ends with you this way///////// Marla & I combo"
"girl,you got me mesmerized/think i found my paradise"
"girl, you've got me mesmerized, smokin body gorgeous smile {eyes}"
"waking up tangled up"
"i know what you're thinking your eyes say it all/you see right through me i'm starting to fall"
"iv'e spent my life searching/for a soulmate like you/the look in you're eyes/says your feeling it too"
"i jacked my back up lovin you/girl its my favorite thing to do/just let me stretch a time or two/ "y'all laugh at this and scroll right through" comedy relief"
"i'm not the smartest man/or so iv'e been told/but a woman like you/ is worth way more than gold"
Marty Dodson commented on Ted Morse's lyric:
"I like the idea of "prescious". That points straight at the "someone so rare" idea. "
(more)"I've seen treasures/from round the world/but nothings as precious/as you are girl //your someone so rare"
"my shooting star/my triple crown win/there wont be another/girl like you again ----different, but what the hell, it might trigger some new ideas"
"seen beautiful things/all around this world/but never seen anything/ like you girl/ your someone so rare"
"seen beautiful things/all around this world/but never seen anything/ like you girl/ your someone so rare"
Marty Dodson commented on Ted Morse's lyric:
"She might slap him if he talked about other women in this moment, but I like your other variations of this!"
(more)"I've meet women/all over this world/I've never meet anyone/like you girl/your someone so rare"
"someone so rare/someone so right/i'd lasso the moon tie down the night your kisses so sweet/no others compare/they give me chills like the cool autumn air your someone so rare"
"Someone so rare/someone so right/you melt my heart you complete my life With Kisses so sweet/no others compare/they give me chills like the cool autumn air You’re someone so rare"
"Someone so rare/ someone so right / someone I'd spend the rest of my life"
Marty Dodson commented on Ted Morse's lyric:
"I like these lines, Ted, but my wife wouldn"t believe I was being sincere if I said this to her. It"s a little over the top. Plus, I don"t want to use the word "rare" because it gives away our hook. I"d love to hear some more conversational ideas if you have some!"
(more)"You're the pot of gold at, the end of my rainbow, million dollar lover just wanna let you know, someone so rare like you"
Marty Dodson commented on Ted Morse's lyric:
""Hear You From A Mile Away" could be the song"s title. Interesting."
(more)"You don't have to say a word, cause when I look in your eyes, I can hear you from a mile away"
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Marti Dodson commented on Ted Morse's lyric:
"love the first half of this! it's a big thought though..maybe more chorusy
(more)"
"I wouldn't be me if it wasn't for you, like this snapshot in time crazy things we would do"