Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on toddtanium's lyric:
"good stuff in this...here's my tweek on this approach...again I'm trying to make it fit the melody perfectly:
"I'm never gonna change your mind
That is how it starts and how it ends
Trying is a waste of time
But maybe we can stil be friends""
"I'm never gonna change your mind/ You know how this whole thing ends. Darlin' when I all goes down/ Maybe we can still be friends."
ImpossibleKings commented on toddtanium's lyric:
"Really like this Todd and goes well with Kevrees' opening line.ππ»ππ»ππ»"
(more)"Now the loneliness and solitude are fading like a mist."
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on toddtanium's lyric:
"good stuff in this...here's my tweek on this approach...again I'm trying to make it fit the melody perfectly:
"I'm never gonna change your mind
That is how it starts and how it ends
Trying is a waste of time
But maybe we can stil be friends""
"I'm never gonna change your mind/ You know how this whole thing ends. Darlin' when I all goes down/ Maybe we can still be friends."
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ImpossibleKings commented on toddtanium's lyric:
"Really like this Todd and goes well with Kevrees' opening line.ππ»ππ»ππ»"
(more)"Now the loneliness and solitude are fading like a mist."