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I realize that it is too late to get the votes, but I had an idea that combines rsmithline and paul's line. Let's build bridges, knock down walls/and see the light to a better way. This allows us to repeat the hook of better way in the chorus. It also changes the rhyme scheme slightly which can be adventageous. It also decreases the use of the word love which is already mentioned three times in the song.
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